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You could try adding an image or video into each of your factors to help people understand them better.
ReplyDeleteyou could also add a bit more writing to the factors that have less than others such as your government and regulation part.
DeleteIt is nice that all the factors are on one page making it easy to read though and navigate. The blog design is nice and colourful giving a unique experience when you read through it. One problem is that the blog looks a bit squished and the font could be clearer and simpler since you already have a lot going on around the blog. The referencing is nice and followed the Harvard format. Furthermore you have multiple images with the factors making the blog more interactive and interesting, also adding a video will be nice.
ReplyDeleteThis has since been addressed and more images and graphics have been added
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